by Jason2 Sat Jul 08, 2023 6:01 pm
Looking at the core of the treaty, from clause 1 onwards it amounts to 255 words (using the word count function on Word) so I wonder if the introduction before clause 1 is really something for the newspaper and would not be in the finalised version sent to people to sign? The core rules do state 260 words as the word limit so I see that as confirmed.
Even if that is not the case, I think to declare it "invalid" is extreme, given the amount of time it has taken to get the various powers involved in the war to get this far. "Would need editing to get the word count down" would seem fairer.
On who needs to sign it, I guess by limiting the number and have some sign on behalf of others (particularly where those others are NPC positions) makes administrative sense, both from the point of view of Jason Flower as the person who has drafted it and from Richard's too. It should also get it signed more quickly so we have the peace in place before the end of 1706. I am sure none of us want the war to even have a chance of restarting in 1707 (or would some like that
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I should say I will have no issues with it being signed by King William on Scotland's behalf; saves me having to do it
As to the clauses, not sure I see what the issues are for all of them, especially clause 3. As included in the newspaper "Fortifications in the remainder of Franche-Comte are immediately dismantled by France and none allowed to be rebuilt", Clause 2 allows Austria to occupy the Mont Saint-Etienne Citadel. So that all seems clear, the citadel stays but elsewhere fortifications have to go.
On clauses 5 and 7. I read it as a concession that 5 allows France a garrison in Strasbourg. Its not because its an imperial city that means France can have a garrison there, so there would be no reason to think France would be allowed to have garrisons in Luxembourg and Upper Guelderland.
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